"The day she left her keys on the counter at the Stuyvesant Post
Office was not the first time [Steve Dant had] seen her. He had,
in fact, watched her carefully for three months. It wasn't perverted,
obsessional curiosity that compelled him to note each detail of
her movements as she collected her mail. It was simply in his nature
to observe."
So begins "The Secret Keepers" by Julie Mars, the premiere publication
of GreyCore Press in Pine Bush, NY. If that opening isn't enough
to hook you, add that the woman-whose name, Dant discovers, begins
with a 'C'-lives alone, works in a 14th Street bar, is being trailed
by a paunchy yet rather expert detective, has encounters with a
powerful, vindictive ex-husband and she has a secret.
Dant's obsession escalates, and how he justifies it to himself
is as chilling as his enactment of it. The novel is highly atmospheric,
taking us into the heart of Manhattan, which is in itself a wild
dark secret, full of unexpected beauty and gritty compromise.
Mars writes about the New York City I knew during my ten-year tenure
there-a place of lilac smells and exhaust; of relationships that
spring up with homeless people and elderly ladies and junkies; a
place where danger is woven into the fabric of every day living,
as is a sense of unfathomable mystery; a city that embodies enormous
kindness as well as staggering indifference; a spooky flat wilderness
where a young woman could drink herself blind on a park bench and
shift her life almost beyond her will. In Mars' New York, walking
in the city is like an endless series of little one-act plays-the
pizza man, the stoop sitter, the eccentric man who looks like a
circus performer using the phone booth. A city of sounds, of traffic
and wheels and conversation, of sirens and surprise. A place where
angels can turn into demons, and vice versa.
Unfortunately, Mars falls shy of meeting the potential of "The
Secret Keepers." At some point she veers away from the really hair-raising
edge of Dant's obsession and the book's secrets, and begins to smooth
out all of the feathers she has raised. I found the second half
of the book less compelling and less believable than the first.
The characters continued to engage me, but they no longer left me
at the edge of my seat. The ending is a bit of a soft shoe compared
to what comes before.
And yet, maybe that's just me-maybe I objected to the idea that
things could turn out less than disastrously. For the most part,
I gobbled up this book, and when it ended I wanted to begin at the
beginning again for the sheer pleasure of its breathtaking language
and imagery.
All the characters in this tender novel collectively comprise 'the
secret keepers.' Each, in his or her own way, must come to terms
with what they keep hidden before they can get on with their lives.
But who are the good guys, and who are the bad? The lines keep shifting,
and the novel's true subject may be that all of us are comprised
of many parts, hidden and exposed, and it is those parts that are
allowed to come to light-and to flourish-that determine who we are.
"The Secret Keepers" is Mars' first novel. She has published in
a number of magazines including New York Press and County
Living, and she has taught at New York University, the State
University of New York, Pratt Institute and Sullivan County Community
College. She is currently participating in the doctoral program
at the University of New Mexico in Albuquerque.
Mars is a major new talent and GreyCore Press has made a most promising
beginning. "The Secret Keepers" can be found in local bookstores
and libraries and on the web at
www.amazon.com. GreyCore Press can be reached at 914/744-5081
(phone) or 914/744-8081 (fax).